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Thread: Language Mistakes - Report for typographical, ortographic or grammar errors

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    On the promote tab, the mouseover message says..

    "you will match the rank level of your master, what it's not allowed."

    You mean "which is not allowed"

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    Right, thanks for reporting. It's our latest text as this, added during this beta at our last stage of development, what is highly subsceptible of having mistakes, as all text being currently added has been written hurriedly and it has not been reviewed for any of our English writers. Help from the English community is really useful here. Thank you

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    Achievement

    The achievement for energy used should be "powerful" rather than poweful.
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    Thank you! I wonder nobody reported it before. It was a very exposed typo.

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    When Scouts use the Steal skill, a message like this appears: (I changed the SL to an X, that is not an issue)

    xBradenH tried to Steal (SL X) Rat I: : success!
    Rat I has been stolen (gold -12)

    This language says I stole the rat as opposed to I stole gold from the rat. Not sure how yall want to fix it. The first line could potentially be left alone, but the second may say something like "Rat I was stolen from (gold-12)" or "Rat I lost gold (-12)"
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    You're right! Thank you I like the last option.

    When we finally fiinish the combat, we need to build all possible constructions for this combat log and sent it to our writter to review it and correct this kind of grammar faults.

    Meanwhile, this kind of reports are really useful!! Thank you

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    In the profile page when I don't get any exp from my master the message says "Your master, Dame *, has completed an adventure, but it was not enough instructive to use your master?s teachings." It should be "Your master, Dame *, has completed an adventure, but it was not instructive enough to use your master?s teachings."

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    You're right, thank you for noticying.

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    Alex, in all the combat logs it will say stuff like: Zab is no more effected by Terror.

    Everywhere that is says no more it should say, 'no longer'.

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    Right. In the activity log should not have mistakes since it has been reviewed by our writters, but the combat log may have tons of mistakes, since we are still working on it and we don't take it to review unitl we finish this part of development, so please forgive our faults.

    Thank you very much for your corrections.

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